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I would have to agree with many others on here. I'm quite an aivd reader, with a keen eye for detail, and if the beginning doesn't hook me, I put ...

I love it when I come across something written cleverly and for a light bit of amusement. And even more so when the writer pulls it off well. I don't ...

Yeah, nah, this was FUNNY start to finish! I wondered what I was getting myself into, starting to read this. Then, I realised what it was - and it is ...

Oh oh ! You write vividly, with a keen sense of imagery and imagination, and leave no detail mysterious. It's bright and alive and just real as a result. And, ...

I'm not going to say that the idea is not original, because you know this already. The thing is, to present a familiar idea in poetry, you've really got to ...

As a poem, this didn't grab my attention much by way of interesting imagery or any kind of comprehensive plot. It seemed a lot more like song lyrics to me ...

So, this is an idea a friend came up with - and I can't believe I didn't notice the symbolism before - if, that is, it is correct. My aura ...

I don't know if it's just my mood or what, but 'Kill me slowly' seemed to have an immediate heavy feeling to it - long and drawn out without you ...

Oh, the joys of classical poetry and rhyme. It's been so long since I read anything good that rhymed! And, funny that, it just so happens to be an older ...

To captain.classy and Tenyo, I'd like to point out that many poems are written for the pure purpose of capturing the moment, the description, the instant, the experience . need ...

Interesting topic - something I've considered often; intellect vs instinct. But not as cleverly and subtly pulled off as it could have been. Too obvious, especially in the line, 'Moral ...

I'd have to disagree with KatTrain on that one - I have not seen any 'where I'm from' poems, ever! So...I wondered if we were going to bring up the ...

To everyone above who said they didn't have a clue - I'd say go read this UnknownPoet's 'Ham, Cheese and Pickle' poem. Then rethink your commments. So...only I understand why ...

I looked at this from a Gregory Corso point of view - and his poems are often long and meaningless and rambling, much like life itself, so I'd have to ...

Forget technique for a moment - this is one of the rare few poems on here that can take me through from start to finish, interest me the whole time, ...