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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lou

    I enjoy poems with a healthy dash of nostalgia and something to remember. I seem to write out of my own experiences and knowledge a lot, so I can really ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Wayfarer

    Heya Inkwell! I have a pretty big vocabulary, but I'm not so good with slang or brand-type words, so yes, I DID Google the word 'wayfarer,' which I was not ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Limericks of the Cullens

    Hey UV! Those limericks were meant to be funny, and they were. I love a bit of light humour, with no heavy handed meaning or anything attached, for a short ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Samberine

    Really - it's another interestin experiment on VOICE isn't it! At least I can actually comprehend what's going on here, unlike a couple of other poems of yours! Anyway. I ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Honeydrops Ahoy!

    What is the purpose of this poem? Almost everything, save the one glaring exception ('honey-tinted clouds') is the perfect cliche. It slides off my tongue, absolutely tasteless, adds nothing to ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Of Gold, Gleam, Metal; or, a poem containing a play

    You know...I still think you have a beautiful idea here, and whether or not you choose to do much with it is all up to you. I also noticed an ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: por que las cosas cambian.

    The Spanish title certainly caught my eye. Me gusta mucho el espanol - de hecho, muchas lenguas me encantan; especialmente los que hablo! Anyway. The stars, the moon they have ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: FREAK

    Oh my God. I...this... It was just wow. I don't know how else to say it. I am not a big fan of sci fi - but this definitely caught ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Fate Screaming

    I can see this as a beginning to a novel - and that is most probably because how disjointed it is. I can imagine that you'd need a lot more ...

    May 6, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Woman Plays Poker

    So...why did I read it to the end? Because I liked the idea - a woman playing poker with men. I probably would not have finished the piece had the ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: And I’ll give you chocolate

    Oh...here we go again! A bit of mental gymnastics for me, and I still haven't figured out the one with the cheese and the mirrors - I commented on the ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I am me.

    I didn't get much from reading this. The short stanzas seemed stunted, making the 'identity' concept likewise seem stunted as well. 'I am me' - and so what? We KNOW ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Chevrolet

    Oh, wow ! Can't believe I only just came across this. And this is one of the rare few poems I feel like I have nothing to say about except ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Poetry

    I like the subject of the thread - it caught my eye, and, truth be told, that's the only reason why I joined too! You're so talented across so many ...

    May 5, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    I've read too many really amazing books to say which is the 'best'. I thought this thread was about choosing ONE book as the best, but most people seem to ...

    May 5, 2010


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