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Oh, this was a sweet poem. Well, sweetly short, that is - the subject matter is rather dark, no? Even so, with the fun imagery and metaphors (which you did ...

Well, the girl who wore men's cologne certainly sounds intriguing, and I was fascinated by her all throughout the poem. I have little experience with different forms, but I am ...

Oh, that was funny and very informative indeed. At first, I wasn't going to bother reading the thing in the spoiler, but the scientist in me reared its head and ...

Everyone says poetry is an art, and it is. Or is it? Here are some reasons for why it is like a sci experiment: 1. It's good to have a ...

Ooooo - into some academic discussion already! Hey Aley - if you want to discuss poetry, check out the awesome 'Poetry Discussion and Tips' thread under 'Poetry' in the 'Read/Write' ...

Uh oh, whenever we get into scholarly discussion on a Welcome thread, I know we've got some serious writers and reviewers... Welcome to YWS! And the way you wrote the ...

Oh. Wow. I didn't think much of the title, but thought I'd give the story a go anyway. And since it was told in such an innovative and intriguing style, ...

Just about everyone is tired of life in one way or another, and I felt tired of this poem from the first line, since the topic was cliche, and it ...

I LOVE a fantastic opening line - and this was one such :D. However, I'd suggest changing the title to something a little less obvious, to keep the mystery. Overall, ...

That was FUNNY :P. Probably not the response you were expecting, but I enjoyed it because it was original, and it was original because I don't see too many (if ...

7/10 for good contrast, but a little squinting on my part to tell what it is.

I can write in pretty much any style, but I tend to use cursive for classroom notes (so that my book looks professional and pretty), letters and notes to people, ...

Thank you to everyone! I am honoured to be the Featured Member :D.

Anything with a title like 'The Memory' will catch my eye, since I'm a sucker for all things deeply nostalgic. I wondered how creative you might get with this - ...

Well, what can I say, other than the fact that I really enjoyed this? So, I'm sorry, I'm not going to particularly helpful here at all, since this had beautiful ...