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  • Randomosity Re: Rate the username above you.

    hahahahahahaha - I'll go for a 9/10. What a name.

    May 12, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Okay, enough apologizing. (Sarg's NaPo thread)

    So, we've come to the agreement that you do not care if I am expressing my enjoyment at these a tad late, and that I definitely would like to comment ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Watching "In the middle, somewhat elevated"

    So, I see you've taken another hack at this, trying to be less obvious about the emotion you want to create and focussing a little more on the imagery and ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: A jar of glowworms and stale memories

    Oooooooh, Kamas! My God, the first words that pop into my mind when I read your poetry are: snuggly, sweet and delectable. The above poems, alongside your marvellous NaPo are ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hypotheses

    Knowledge is certainly an intriguing thing to contemplate. And I like that you are so EXPERIMENTAL, that you are willing to sacrifice your self and sanity for the sake of ...

    May 11, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Rate the username above you.

    7.25964755 out of 10. I love the idea of a female dragon, but I also like French. And the linguist in me tells me it should be 'Dragonette' to sound ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Secret of Life

    I wondered if I was going to get an overly philosophical feeling from reading this. Or if might completely miss the point, or try to hammer it home too much. ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: the fat potato

    Okay, so I haven't really ever read anything where there's no capitals - so nice work for showing me how the technique works! But good thing you had full stops, ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Keening

    I enjoyed this. I read it smiling to the end, loving the personification, the descriptions - ever-inventive - and the tight feeling encapsulated here. The ancient portal to the garage ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Watching "In the middle, somewhat elevated"

    I wouldn't have known this was about a ballet performance had you not put the note up above. (By the way, I love dance performances :P) Overall, it sounded like ...

    May 10, 2010
  • Other Re: An Elwick Tragedy

    Holy moly - you've really got something going here, haven't you? :D There was a lot of wit and humour in this, and snappy lines that made it a delight ...

    May 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: No title yet.. :( (please read)

    Hey Lena - lovely name, by the way - I'm here to give you some pointers on this, okay? First of all, a note on details in a story. Details ...

    May 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Manger

    I would be angry at you too, actually, since like Evi, I see no reason in why I went and wrote mine, considering all the marvellous entries I'v already seen ...

    May 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: McBride

    Hey Attolia! Long time, no review :D. Anyway, first off, I love what you were asked to explore - existentialism. Secondly, I love gymnastics - and a double back handspring ...

    May 9, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Leave Your Shoes (2)

    Okay, so I'm commenting late but I don't care about deadlines, and I really don't think you should care about the 'Extra! Extra!' contest either - though you didn't hear ...

    May 9, 2010


When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides