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Re: Finis. Exit.
So, I'm a couple of days late, but I knew I couldn't resist reading this all the same. And - what difference does it make when this is read? A ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: 'In the Yellow' and 'Earth to earth'
Thanks Ky, kidashka, Evi! I wonder what is bothering about the 'kg.' It looks weird, agreed. Read it aloud, though. See what that sounds like; my mouth forms the letters ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Navita's EERAAI Entry - Past Cherry Island
Attached is the story I wrote for the 'Extra! Extra! Read All About It!' contest on YWS. Enjoy.
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
ME again. With my own poetry this time for you to dissect on thematic and stylistic levels, mwahahahaha. Good luck :D. And thank you. 'In the Yellow' and 'Earth to ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: The WORSE four letter word.
Oh my God!!! I was right! (As in: I am 99% certain I know what the word is :D). But first, I want to say I enjoyed this. It's sharp, ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: 'In the Yellow' and 'Earth to earth'
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May 27, 2010 -
Re: Soneto
So, I thought I'd give my two cents worth here. I like Spanish, I understand it - it's a beautiful language. I would love to be able to read poetry ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately, the ghosts came back and murdered the rats. Mwahahaha...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
Hey Evi, here again (it's called 'joining forces/minds' :P) Wondering what you made of this: This is not a poem Have fun!
May 27, 2010 -
Re: This is no longer a poem
When I read a poem, I view the world in the way the poet views the world. In which case, the following line only adds to the rest of the ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Poets are
Oh Kamas - you said it perfectly yourself! Irony - and here I was, reading the poem, thinking how unbelievable ironic it is that your POEM has a POINT which ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: This is a spring morning
This was cute - cute in terms of its size, cute in terms of the images themselves, cute in the way you described those images. However, at times I felt ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Poetry is a Science Fair Experiment - Discuss :P
Haha, just thought of another difference between poetry and science fair experiments. In the sci exp's, you've got to make it look like you've done a lot of hard work, ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: naivete; shame; love (or the ribbon thief)
Why did she steal the ribbon? Or rather - why might anyone do things without thought, without a care because of a 'rejection slip come the day before'? :P This ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: The Fragmentarian Speaks of Mortality
Oh. Wow. The flow here was...superb. The stanzas beautifully melted into one another, and the lack of capitals was brilliant - more so because the topics you discuss are so ...
May 15, 2010
