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I want to run away with this. Kubla Khan -- an all time classical favourite (a pity I can't stomach most classical poetry any more) -- I think I must ...

I've decided I'm going to comment on Alias , despite every gut instinct telling me to run in the other direction. I just can't stress the importance of first lines ...

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Oh, yes. Timing wise, this assures me that you can do it. Forget the obviousness of the metaphor -- look at the poem, visually. See how that makes you read ...

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And then? And then? Loved Broken , but was screaming at the ending. :P Otto made me smile, especially the beginning. Why must these things end so sadly, Hannah?

Hey Mustard, For these short ones you need killer endings to make them have any kind of impact. Fix these endings for me? Thanks (and good to see you experimenting ...

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Oh, thank God you put the right thing in the spoiler. You asked me to look through this. It's an 88 page list on a word document, Ky. I five-columned ...

Jesus, sarg. I forgot to breathe reading your latest. I'm sure you must be lying. How on earth can you write poetry this well having not written since NaPo? Good ...

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I know eh, Kamas. I think we just found ourselves another literary genius in the making. Uraziel, I forgot to mention: Flowers and Folios was also great, as was Sunshine ...