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*gasps* Why have I only just found this? carnival Only one thing really struck me as amazingly different about this (other than the magical vocabulary of yours) - I imagine ...

No, no, no , Kamas - this is not a 'hopeless case'. Or, if it is, you are putting my poetry to shame. I wouldn't say you're in a writing ...

Do you always write 'short' stories that deserve to be novels? That I would order be novels, had I that power? So...this was tight. Tense, on an edge. Much like ...

I love learning things from poetry. This one sent me on a wild goose chase across the net (not so wild, ha), searching for the meaning of 'coelacanth.' I have ...

It's funny, but this is the second poem today that's really got me thinking about the nature of poetry itself. I reckon poetry has become very 'read-in-one's-own-head' actually, meaning that ...

I love it when writers try something different...this has certainly got me thinking, actually. Poetry is meant to be timeless, but it is also meant to be concreted down with ...

There is something very interesting about the way you write, and I think it's the casual nature of the imagery, the nonchalance with which you place the metaphors and symbols ...

Reminder to myself to give this the wonderfully long review it deserves. Expect to see something here.

I love a good laugh, and this certainly provided it. I guess this is meant to be a humorous piece, then, which is why I reckon it's okay to be ...

So, I meant to review this some time ago. We're going on a bit of a 'sun' theme, by the looks of your latest works - or their titles, at ...

I generally find I only bother to continue reading a piece if the first line grabs me, if it hints at a mystery, seeming to give away everything while giving ...

Hmph. this wasn’t addressed to you, but to my thumb Fine. I take it the 'you' is (mostly) addressing the thumb, then? My treasure, I found you right there on ...

This was a seamless poem. What I loved about it was the tumbling imagery, the overflow of language and words, the freedom of lines unhindered by a lack of commas, ...

What. Are. You. Doing ? And we think that if I showed you the fun. It wouldn’t be fun ~ anymore. Do you understand now darling? And now - I ...

Eli - have a read, have a write, whatever you feel like.:D Of course, since it's after the comp, nitpicks probably won't help a great deal (although I agree, there's ...