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Hmmm...that was an interesting experiment in spacing and...I'm not entirely sure it worked! (Yes, I'm going to critique my own advice here, but then again, I am at liberty to, ...

I don't have a preference for when I'm reading - as long as the story is well-written, both flow perfectly fine for me. But when writing, I used to always ...

I wouldn't actually recommend differentiating between them using italics or font or any of that, since that unecessarily stops the flow as the reader tries to adjust to the new ...

As someone with a passion for genetics and evolution, the whole concept of designer babies fascinates me from an academic point of view. That's not to say I agree - ...

So...what may I call you, x3CoFx3? ^^ I enjoyed this. I loved the sharp intensity of the poem, the focus, the tension that strung this poem together from start to ...

Oh, won't you? ^^ But you are; right here you are, and that's the wonderful irony of it. :D To get the point across, it's what you have to do. ...

Oo, it's facebook in YWS style! My thoughts exactly. (Seriously, though, this makes the profiles look LOADS better! Well done, Nate!).

Hey! I wouldn't say it was hard to figure out at all! (On the same note, it wasn't easy, either, which meant that it was neither frustratingly vague and nor ...

Ooooh, I love it when writers try something new! As far as the poetry goes, were I to read it all in one go, or maybe even in stanzas, there ...

Argh...I read Of Mice and Men about four times, and hated every word of it. I'm sad to say my teacher wasn't the greatest appreciator of Steinback - I would ...

For all those who don't like Twilight...try reading Count Dracula - the Count Dracula in all its glory. I, well, I tried reading it, I honestly did. (but it was ...

Hey! Thanks for clarifying that up - and no, I like to know what's going on in the writer's minds when writing. That's the reason why I try and get ...

You attract long reviews, I'm afraid. I'm also pushed for time, so only have read the piece, and not any reviews, so forgive me in advance if I repeat anything ...

Oooooh, a fellow New Zealander! Kia Ora, Lily :D Most of what I wanted to say has been well-covered by the others, so be good to take their advice into ...

Holy moly. That was scary , not in the sense that it was frightening, but in the sense that you've got complete control over the plot while the reader has ...