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Hey - I got a bit grouchy this morning since I wrote something here and the computer ate it...but I returned. ^^ talking of michelangelo I can picture you having ...

Hey Eli - The reason why I could not connect with the poem (and, believe me, I did want to) was because it doesn't really cover anything new, or in ...

Banned for having an unbeatable avvie.

Hey Lily! It's so good to see you taking people's advice into account and giving the poem a makeover. I have to say, the formatting looks much better now that ...

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I'm not sure if anyone else will get it, *waves arms* I get it. And I LOVELOVELOVE it when people write poetry about science. It makes my day, seeing my ...

Maneda read my mind - that's exactly what I was planning to do when you first put this up: decode the poem :D. Fantastico...I love a good bit of mental ...

Erm, not sure this is the place to ask this, but I was just saving a couple lines worth of a PM message, and I got this message: 'Please delete, ...

Hey! I meant that I read it till over halfway - as I got more and more into the story, it became easier (indeed, it was just so FUNNY to ...

Sheesh, it's not often I'm so hooked by the idea of a story as this. I had a read of the synopsis of the novel, and I was thinking: wow. ...

Hey Ben! I haven't actually reviewed anything by you before (as far as I can remember), so I have no idea of your current or usual style or anything. But ...

I've read countless 'chapter 1's' and beginnings of short stories (and novels, too, actually) that begin with that tried and tested cliche of the main character waking up and carrying ...

Hey Gabby! (may I call you that? I have a tendency to nickname people :D) I had a read of the first chapter, and then I read the synopsis, and ...

For being fantabulistically awesome! (and actually reading through to the end of my critiques :lol:)

Hey River! Welcome to YWS! So...this was a sweet analogy (pardon the pun). It was short, like a mug of hot chocolate, devoured easily in one sitting. It's interesting that ...