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  • Narrative Poetry Re: If Roses Grew Where Petals Fall

    I'm always hesitant to comment on personal poems since they hold so much meaning that is beyond the poem for the writer. However, I was thinking about this just before ...

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: With Lobe;

    Wow. Rarely do I find something as creative as this. The style is chilling. It's sharp, poised, but distinctly elegant all the same. You have very appropriately placed this in ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Wasting Time to Camouflage

    While I didn't enjoy this, I can certainly say that there's something interesting you made me think of. But first - a word on why not. At the beginning, the ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: 'Quark, quark, quark'

    Thanks everyone! Shepherd - I know what you mean about pacing. Since the first is so long, one tends to glaze over the words to devour them faster, meaning they ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: New Sitemap

    Wow! Thanks Ky! (Oh, by the way, I just noticed that when I clicked on 'My Feed' and 'My Profile' on the sitemap, it led me to the index/home page ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Inspiration?

    The best inspiration, I find, is good poetry itself. Read it, live it, breathe it. When you see how others do it - and do it well at that - ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: First Impression

    I, um, took 'Skins' to be a male name for some reason. I also thought it was an alarmingly creepy name, too - I mean, it sounds like someone who ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Is beginners' poetry influenced by lyrics of modern music?

    So...that's what it boils down to right? Beginners essentially have no poetic background to draw from and associate it with the next closest thing they can find - song lyrics. ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: pulse

    So, I keep coming back to this. This story is irresistible - it has this magnetic intellectual pull for me. This time, I had a read of Richard Siken's 'You ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Starving Poet Needs to Review!

    Some poetic experimentation here: Enjoy,

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: That one lunch.

    Did you consider sticking this in fanfic? Since this reads like TWILIGHT and I'm suprised no one has explicitly stated that yet. If I want to read Twilight, I'll read ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010

    Why can't I double 'Like' this? 'Types of kiss, according to the encyclopaedia' - delicious, just as I would have expected from the title. Granted, after repeat mentions of cows ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Rhyme Scheme

    A poem about poetry. Yay. And we're discussing rhyme schemes, too - did you consider maybe starting up a thread in 'Poetry Discussion and Tips'? Because this reads about as ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Kallisto [Edited]

    Hey Kamas! Not continuing on that 'Summer Poetry' thread? (Just curious :D). So, I had a read of the info on wiki after reading the poem, and it made much ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Information Desk Archive Re: June 27 (GMT) Will Be A Reviewing Sunday

    Cool! Thanks for letting us know which timezones go when! EDIT: I also really like the fact that the info icon thing on the index page is BLUE - a ...

    Jun 27, 2010


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