Navita

Decided to just put it there. No attachment :D.

Since this is for a contest and since this is a poem, I'm going to approach it a little differently. I'm all for the content-as-well-as-style type of reviewing, and I ...

Hey! I skim read the third chapter, and from what I can tell, it's looking much neater now. Good work! I just happened to notice one thing (and remind me ...

io I'm not well-versed in mythology, so I looked this up after reading it for the first time. And I was delighted to discover how all the details fitted in. ...

This is surprisingly chilling, considering the way it is written. Perhaps that's what makes it so chilling. That child's tone, that naivete, that absolute innocence. One might call this, then, ...

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Known for writing awesome scipoetry and sacrificing herself and sanity to try out new, formidable styles of writing. And for being obsessively in love with Richard Siken. (As am I. ...

Haha, nice try, but no. TUBM is secretly addicted to YWS (or not so secretly...).

SCIENCE POEMS. Yesssssss!!!!! And philosophy interwoven! That's the best kind :P *tries to quieten herself and gather up some useful thoughts on the poem itself* So. Rarely do I find ...

If the first thing I made sure to do was to *like* this, then you can be certain you've done a good job. First of all, the subject matter itself ...

Well, I'm going to disagree here. Sure, poems need a healthy balance between literality and abstraction, reality and imagination, but sometimes a literal diction does indeed work best! After all, ...

So. A capturing title. And a whimsical piece, clearly. Not enough for me to fall in love with it, though - in fact, were it not for the first line ...

Antoinette - A unique tone, for sure. And it's told with the sort of simplicity that I would expect from the boy's point of view. I'm having trouble figuring out ...

Bubbles! So long since I read one of your poems! I must say, this was quite a treat. Simple but not simplistic - this evokes images well-known to everyone without ...

A really bubbly, bouncy girl who loves her colours.