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HEY! What about the compulsive writers? Or, ah, just the...prolific...writers? Or...I don't know. This is a writing site. I think there should be a specific writing clique with a difference. ...

Righto. It's good to see how thorough you were in planning this, Kylan. The UFO served to actualize Ignacio's need for distraction . Something that could counter-act the redundancy of ...

Hi Kylan - I wondered when I would get to review a fiction piece of yours. I don't think I have, so far - although I have read pieces. Revenant ...

I'm going to give this a detailed, specific review first, and then talk about the bigger picture. I think I'll just do this in the order the story is told, ...

This is primarily a humorous piece again, all monologue, so I can hardly give it a proper review. Actually, I found this rather creepy - not at all funny like ...

On the contrary, I think we should poetry-dare more often.

*cough cough* Remind me what the point of this is? You hate Adobe Reader. Fine. We get that from the first couple of lines. That's a statement, not a poem. ...

Have received mine just now. It's fabulous. Thanks Nate. :D

Erm. Are you sure you want to have a name in the book that can be pronounced in a variety of ways? Would it not be easier to stick to ...

'In nineteen minutes, you can mow the front lawn, color your hair, watch a third of a hockey game.' From Nineteen Minutes by Jodi Picoult. It only gets better from ...

Haha, it's so strange how these things snowball off...I've actually seen some other rather humorous pieces on YWS lately, so this further made my day :D. I don't think, though, ...

This is ridiculous. And it is ridiculously funny, told the way they are. (And you say you do not write with 'intent' - I see plenty of that here: you ...

Tim - I will begin with the story you want to convey: that of a boy dead by (lung cancer, I assume, from) smoking. Firstly, what emotion do you want ...

I certainly appreciate that you are aiming for greater overall coherency in this poem in terms of interweaving your ideas. I must say, you have not let your images run ...

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