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Hey Jagg - I find it hard to pinpoint why this reminded me of Siken so much (perhaps it is our mutual love for him :P), but it did. Maybe ...

And - this must be a record for subsequent reviews - but after taking into account that idea about 'Emergency,' talking to Jagged for a bit, and contemplating the concept ...

Kylan - Yes, I noticed it was called 'daddy'. And I am familiar with using titles as an extension of ideas in poetry. But once again, your themes - subthemes, ...

Me again. But. I need to get to the heart of this. Two questions I want myself to answer by the end of this: why did I not see it ...

Not in college yet, but I WILL FIGHT THIS PLAGUE if it comes. I don't want to be so exhausted I can't even think about writing.

Great tips, Hibiscus. I have recently seen a surge of reviews demanding such unecessary things as punctuation and capitalisation, so I think this post is rather timely. I may add ...

Kylan - So, another experiment. My kind of experiment. I enjoyed this, despite its relative length. And I think I rarely summarise my opinion of a work as succinctly as ...

Correction; Helpful loves Siken and I am to blame for it, and I love Siken and Jagg is to blame for that.

DANG IT; JAGGED GOT HERE BEFORE ME. *scowls jealously* :P So, yes, I am in love with Siken (thanks to dear old Jagged) also, and like her, You Are Jeff ...

Hey Ky - So, a shorter poem - or at least one with shorter lines. This is certainly intriguing. An experiment, I presume? :P (You know how much I love ...

Hi careauboy - I won't comment on the specific punctuation etc errors, since I think that's been well covered already. However, I did find something interesting about this poem - ...

Hey CardDragon - So! A dream poem! These are often nonsensical, bizarre and career off in wild directions much like the human subconscious when allowed to run free. And this ...

Hey Hibiscus - Me again! And I am intrigued at the way your writing style is so flexible, so eagerly changed. While 'Senses' had all your i's dotted and t's ...

Hey Hibiscus - There was something refreshingly smooth about this, and I think that was control. That may in part be due to the enjambment, or indeed the shorter lines ...

Gonna agree with ninja here. PETER PAN. (And shush, it is a fairy-tale. Sort of.) I read the book a few years back (was only acquainted with film versions before) ...