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Re: my heart's in the lacquer box
Hey Jagg - I find it hard to pinpoint why this reminded me of Siken so much (perhaps it is our mutual love for him :P), but it did. Maybe ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Postmortem
And - this must be a record for subsequent reviews - but after taking into account that idea about 'Emergency,' talking to Jagged for a bit, and contemplating the concept ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010
Kylan - Yes, I noticed it was called 'daddy'. And I am familiar with using titles as an extension of ideas in poetry. But once again, your themes - subthemes, ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: Postmortem
Me again. But. I need to get to the heart of this. Two questions I want myself to answer by the end of this: why did I not see it ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: So I think college has killed my drive to write.
Not in college yet, but I WILL FIGHT THIS PLAGUE if it comes. I don't want to be so exhausted I can't even think about writing.
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Importante Tips~~~
Great tips, Hibiscus. I have recently seen a surge of reviews demanding such unecessary things as punctuation and capitalisation, so I think this post is rather timely. I may add ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Postmortem
Kylan - So, another experiment. My kind of experiment. I enjoyed this, despite its relative length. And I think I rarely summarise my opinion of a work as succinctly as ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Your opinion on poetry.
Correction; Helpful loves Siken and I am to blame for it, and I love Siken and Jagg is to blame for that.
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Your opinion on poetry.
DANG IT; JAGGED GOT HERE BEFORE ME. *scowls jealously* :P So, yes, I am in love with Siken (thanks to dear old Jagged) also, and like her, You Are Jeff ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010
Hey Ky - So, a shorter poem - or at least one with shorter lines. This is certainly intriguing. An experiment, I presume? :P (You know how much I love ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: poem about betrayal
Hi careauboy - I won't comment on the specific punctuation etc errors, since I think that's been well covered already. However, I did find something interesting about this poem - ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: A Fox, A Dream and A Beast
Hey CardDragon - So! A dream poem! These are often nonsensical, bizarre and career off in wild directions much like the human subconscious when allowed to run free. And this ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: The Amusement
Hey Hibiscus - Me again! And I am intrigued at the way your writing style is so flexible, so eagerly changed. While 'Senses' had all your i's dotted and t's ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Senses
Hey Hibiscus - There was something refreshingly smooth about this, and I think that was control. That may in part be due to the enjambment, or indeed the shorter lines ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Your favourite fairytale?
Gonna agree with ninja here. PETER PAN. (And shush, it is a fairy-tale. Sort of.) I read the book a few years back (was only acquainted with film versions before) ...
Aug 15, 2010
