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Hi Kyladoot - Your aesthetics are working much better than the consistency of your content, so I feel tempted to ignore the content, somewhat. However, poetry isn't built on aesthetics ...

Hey blackbird - So! A redraft, eh? Let's take a look at this: Light washes through the square window and seeps into her, unwanted warmth on her face Good; you ...

Hi blackbird - Clearly, you have a wide vocabulary. Now, it's just a matter of knowing when showing it off has impact, and when you have more impact in simplicity. ...

Hey Kylan – Something it took me about two weeks of (intermittent) thinking to realise about your writing in the flash of space between thought and dream – something you ...

Hey Halycon - Something I feel I must enlighten you about poetry: it's not just about clever word choice, although that can certainly help gain a reader's attention and interest. ...

Jagged - I will begin by saying I have not fully read 'de profundis' - I mean, properly, slowly read it - but from first impressions, I remember preferring this ...

Kylan – How you managed to derive a poem out of *that* picture, I have no idea. But inspiration comes in the strangest of forms, so who am I to ...

Hey Penguin - A confession: it's been a while since I have read shorter poetry and liked it. It begins smoothly, interestingly. 'Today is for silence' immediately gave it a ...

Hey Galerius - So, another dream-poem. My first thought? (And do be aware that I had to search far into the depths of memory for this, since the readings between ...

Jagged, I can't even begin to tell you how amazing you are.

Hey Hibiscus - So, this poem. Very down-to-earth (despite your topic). Childishly amusing, and matter-of-fact. It's nice to see how much more strongly your voice comes across here in this ...

What have you done ? I was planning on reacquainting myself with Mahabharata this weekend just for your poem and you - and you - I have no words to ...

Hey Hibiscus - There was a distinct clarity here, and yet simultaneously a heady breathlessness, the kind of way the lines slip through my fingers and I want to - ...

Hey Hibiscus - Been meaning to go over your pieces for a time now. So, this struck me as a poem just not hitting it right; there is none of ...

Hey Kylan - You have a right to be excited about this. I feel excited by it; I feel excited by the unravelling of it. I have little time, so ...