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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Plasticity - part 1

    So. It's certainly been a while. This is stunning. I'll take it as a whole - The atmosphere is extraordinary, well-crafted and powerful. I want to see this in a ...

    Nov 1, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Not sure if it's a bug or something, but I am unable to forward PMs? I didn't even know it was possible till today.

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: suicide in an airplane

    The simplicity reminds me of Kooser's work. It's really quite something -- encapsulating a single idea, a single theme, a single trajectory in a poem -- much like the linear ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Written In This Skin

    Jesus, Gal. I haven’t felt more disinterested by your work before. I actually haven’t felt more shut out by any piece of writing before, and I’ve read some fairly doorslam-in-the-face ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Sparks and Rushes to the Head

    I like you when you're at your most frank, sincere; I think that is when words sing to me the most, stripped of such cumbersome prerequisites like poeticism or imagery ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Game change: to change people or environment?

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    Aug 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Movements

    I am still flying and the buildings are still very much in the clouds, thank you. And you got another thing wrong: I dislike Plato.

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Poetic Neuroscience (For Kamas)

    On Your Mind Takes a while to get there, but is still madly fascinating in the meantime. Also, for anyone wondering about the scientific basis of empathy, about the most ...

    May 30, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Two Way Mirrors

    Glorious thinking. The best essays are those left unfinished -- we must speak further on this one. I see so many of our conversations running through this -- a product ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: picking oranges in Westminster, CA

    Kylan, Two things: 1) you need jazz 2) I hope you're not getting lazy Do something about the rhythm in this, because at the moment there isn't one. Navita

    May 17, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: hemlock

    Seph, Why are you writing this? What do you want me to get out of it? I mean that as an entirely open, curious question. I've seen this style; tried ...

    May 2, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a love like ours is neolithic.

    anthropologist is fabulous; that ending, in particular.

    Apr 28, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: multi-verse

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    Apr 27, 2011
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    Apr 26, 2011
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    Apr 26, 2011


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