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Re: Plasticity - part 1
So. It's certainly been a while. This is stunning. I'll take it as a whole - The atmosphere is extraordinary, well-crafted and powerful. I want to see this in a ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Not sure if it's a bug or something, but I am unable to forward PMs? I didn't even know it was possible till today.
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: suicide in an airplane
The simplicity reminds me of Kooser's work. It's really quite something -- encapsulating a single idea, a single theme, a single trajectory in a poem -- much like the linear ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Written In This Skin
Jesus, Gal. I haven’t felt more disinterested by your work before. I actually haven’t felt more shut out by any piece of writing before, and I’ve read some fairly doorslam-in-the-face ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Sparks and Rushes to the Head
I like you when you're at your most frank, sincere; I think that is when words sing to me the most, stripped of such cumbersome prerequisites like poeticism or imagery ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Game change: to change people or environment?
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Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Movements
I am still flying and the buildings are still very much in the clouds, thank you. And you got another thing wrong: I dislike Plato.
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Poetic Neuroscience (For Kamas)
On Your Mind Takes a while to get there, but is still madly fascinating in the meantime. Also, for anyone wondering about the scientific basis of empathy, about the most ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Two Way Mirrors
Glorious thinking. The best essays are those left unfinished -- we must speak further on this one. I see so many of our conversations running through this -- a product ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: picking oranges in Westminster, CA
Kylan, Two things: 1) you need jazz 2) I hope you're not getting lazy Do something about the rhythm in this, because at the moment there isn't one. Navita
May 17, 2011 -
Re: hemlock
Seph, Why are you writing this? What do you want me to get out of it? I mean that as an entirely open, curious question. I've seen this style; tried ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: a love like ours is neolithic.
anthropologist is fabulous; that ending, in particular.
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: multi-verse
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Re: multi-verse
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Re: multi-verse
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