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The Lost Years: The Musical Box

The introduction and the first chapter to what I've been writing. Looking for some constructive criticism and feedback, hope you enjoy! Personal messages are welcome!
  • The Lost Years: The Musical Box

    The Prologue and first chapter. Looking for feedback and someone to tell me if it's good or not! Personal messages are very welcome! Hope you enjoy!!

    10 min read


No spring nor summer beauty hath such grace as I have seen in one autumnal face.
— John Donne