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This really touched me since I can relate to it. Happened a couple years ago at the summer camp I work at. There was an instructor who worked at the ...

More TYWC'ers! From what I remember, you were part of the gang with E. Oxenby, Megara, Cool Feet and Molly, right? I remember that you stuck on after they all ...

I'm guessing soccer/football rivalries? The best we got where I live is the "rivalry" between the Washington Redskins and Dallas Cowboys (American football), and that rivalry kinda stinks. Of course, ...

This poem rhymed really well, and it never got off beat. Everything you wrote sounded natural, and, well, I don't have any criticism at all. Great job!

Welcome aboard!

I always find it interesting how each writer likes to write in very different places that usually share the same themes (isolation for one). When I'm at home, I usually ...

Very Edgar Allen Poe like :) You definitely give the reader a sense of the character's fear, but never quite an understanding of it. First, he seemed to quick to ...

I've been writing ever since I could read (although my first stories make very little sense... if any). Nowadays I write because it helps my mind to settle down and ...

There's a lot of depth to be found here; it could be viewed as a commentary on the nature of cities and it could also be viewed as a piece ...

I've actually always seen fantasy as really hard to do. You always need to create entire little worlds, complex character interactions, and if you do anything wrong, you'll have a ...

lol, aye, TYWC is dying probably thanks to me too. I haven't updated the Tips page in forever, and I haven't posted stories/poems like I should be. Toward the end ...

Welcome aboard! If there's anything you need, or any questions you have, just ask me or basically anybody else here. Everyone is new here :)

A special rank does sound like a good prize. Thanks for bringing it up!

I thought it was great! I love post-apocylytpic stories like this, and it really held my attention all the way through, which unfortunately most post-apocylyptic stories don't do. The way ...

I think it's great. You rhyme the entire way through, and somehow you manage to make it sound all very natural. Not only that, but you kept the same consistent ...