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I like the idea of the story and you develop it pretty well, but it needs more fleshing out. This is actually something that could easily be ten, twenty pages. ...

lol, a little bit. yes :)

I couldn't believe my eyes. All my beliefs had been shattered overnight. I no longer know what to think. What I had seen had destroyed my hopes and my future, ...

Lol, good job. Definitely humorous with real style! Not sure if "crumby" is spelled correctly though; I think it's crummy or something like that, but I'm not sure. Also, be ...

Hey! I'm pretty much in the same situation (will be soon). I really want to just write full time after this year, but there's no way I could support myself ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. He hated pickles on ...

Between Ford and Chevy...... probably Chevy. My family has always bought Chevrolets, and the car I bought back in January is a Chevy. Not sure why I like Chevy's, it ...

Welcome aboard Skye Demon! By the way, I like the name.

Glad to meet ya! I think you'll like it here too :)

I really liked this. The past is viewed abstractly, yet with a definite personal quality; it almost comes off as sounding personified. However, you need to go through and grammar ...

I never have really played an instrument. I use to play the guitar for a few years, but I stopped doing it for awhile and was never able to pick ...

I love collecting coins too! I was going through all these old coins we have in jars at my house with my neighbor, and we found a lot of pennies ...

My Thanksgiving went fairly well; my uncle and aunt came up from North Carolina and we all had a grand ole time eating Turkey and such. Now I'm looking forward ...

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Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. He hated pickles on ...