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Re: How Well Do You Know Me Quizzes
Not sure if this is a trend that is likely to continue or not, but from now on, post all "How Well Do You Know Me Quizzes" here so that ...
Apr 27, 2005 -
Re: BRITISH ELECTION
Well, looking at it from the outsider, American perspective... Tony Blair seems to be liked by most British, but at the same time, his trusted by very few. So labour, ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: How Well Do You Know hekategirl?
Heh, do I spot a trend? I just made one up myself too, lol. But I'm just going to stick mine in my AIM profile sometime later when it's finally ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: How Well Do You Know Galatea?
50! But if I took it again, I could get higher, lol
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: The Rainbow Connection
You need to spend more time editing your stories. But anyways... This is really good! It's quite humorous and it's kind of like an essay written through the viewpoint of ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: September Wars
I don't really quite like this; like bubblewrapped said, it lacks jazz. That is, there's nothing actually wrong with it, and the flow is actually done quite well, but there's ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: Take A Step Back
Aye, this needs to be proofread. But other than that... Like Snoink, I appreciated the change in the typical suicidal story; usually it's about some dreary, whiney teenager talking about ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: The Marathon of Hope Continues
It's great how you open it; got me reading and interested right away. Then you intrigued me even more with your second paragraph; sometimes, actually most of the time, asking ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: Big Changes!
One new user level has been added: VIP. To become a VIP, you must be nominated by someone who is already a VIP. This new user level will show up ...
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: My boy
You need to decide how you want the rhyming scheme right now; as it is, it sounds very disjointed in places as it has no specific pattern to it. Also, ...
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: seven
Good piece of prose; provides a good snapshot of a specific moment in time. However, I did not quite get: "i could just open mouths and stick my scarlet tongue ...
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: i shot dorothy gale [this ain't kansas] (13+)
I thought that it was a nicely done, and yes the "there is more to life" theme is not original, but neither are love poems. What marks a piece are ...
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: i took you for grant[ed]
Don't have much to say except that it was excellent and each line was extraodinarly well-written; definitely one of your best. Very dirty though, lol
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: The Beach
This is part of the book I'm writing, but this part stands on its own so I thought I'd post it here to get some criticism. The novel itself is ...
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: A Confederacy of Dunces
For the moment, the name of the author escapes me, but the title is "A Confederacy of Dunces." The book follows the adventures of one Ignatius P. Reilly through his ...
Apr 25, 2005
