Nate

I don't really quite like this; like bubblewrapped said, it lacks jazz. That is, there's nothing actually wrong with it, and the flow is actually done quite well, but there's ...

Aye, this needs to be proofread. But other than that... Like Snoink, I appreciated the change in the typical suicidal story; usually it's about some dreary, whiney teenager talking about ...

It's great how you open it; got me reading and interested right away. Then you intrigued me even more with your second paragraph; sometimes, actually most of the time, asking ...

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You need to decide how you want the rhyming scheme right now; as it is, it sounds very disjointed in places as it has no specific pattern to it. Also, ...

Good piece of prose; provides a good snapshot of a specific moment in time. However, I did not quite get: "i could just open mouths and stick my scarlet tongue ...

I thought that it was a nicely done, and yes the "there is more to life" theme is not original, but neither are love poems. What marks a piece are ...

Don't have much to say except that it was excellent and each line was extraodinarly well-written; definitely one of your best. Very dirty though, lol

This is part of the book I'm writing, but this part stands on its own so I thought I'd post it here to get some criticism. The novel itself is ...

For the moment, the name of the author escapes me, but the title is "A Confederacy of Dunces." The book follows the adventures of one Ignatius P. Reilly through his ...

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Good! Just a few more incidents such as this and maybe class can just be held in jail cells! Anyhow... Galatea is absolutely right; any good teacher knows how to ...

Humans are egotistical. Therefore, we believe ourselves to be the neatest thing since fire and sliced bread. I think the universe is far to large for there to be a ...

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I was tired when I wrote that. I certainly wasn't saying he's a Nazi. I'm saying he's a conservative. Conservatives frighten me. There have been statements made by this new ...