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On August 8th, YWS will be holding another open-mic session! That means poetry readings, flash fiction shout-a-thons, and more indie music. The times are below. What can you contribute? You ...

From 12:01 am GMT to 11:59 pm GMT July 25th, 2010, YWS held its third ever Review Day. The goal: 538 reviews in 24 hours on 6 continents. Did we ...

547 reviews is the final count; nine more than the goal and ten more than last time around. 561 reviews total once you include Art / Photography. Absolutely incredible. I'll ...

I liked the story, and it's well-written but needs polishing up. Firstly, the back and forth between the future and present didn't really work. It's very disjointed, and just interrupts ...

This reminds me of one of my Great Aunts when I was younger. She used to smoke all the time, and as a kid, I always suppressed the urge to ...

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You have a good, clear writing style and I didn't notice any grammatical errors so it's clear you have taken time in developing this piece. However, the story is also ...

Well, in the space of minutes, the weather outside went from sunny to tornado warning. So, I have no power or phones right now (I'm on my android phone right ...

Heh, there's a lot that's wrong with this story ZYLF! But that's okay; it's the same with all of us. Firstly though, please watch your grammar even in normal posts! ...

Heh, I found this piece amusing. It doesn't really look like you're looking for an in-depth review, but you do need to proofread your work more. There were a lot ...

Hey there tamtam, When writing a poem or lyrics, you don't need to rhyme the lines. Getting rhyming right is extremely tricky, and something that not even the best poets ...

Crikey Jack. I don't know how you do it. I don't know how any of you do it; I feel like crashing after just 4 reviews! We've got 200 reviews ...

I have to agree with Firestarter. If this person really causes you to feel this way, then why resort to time-worn cliches and trite phrases? You need to speak as ...

Good experiment, but not quite right. As smaur pointed out, part of the problem is the text in between the stars. The problem is that they're mostly adjectives with no ...

Aye, I was confused too. Is this a replacement chapter, or a continuation from the previous? In any case, on the formatting not staying, it's because the post box on ...