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Got in 10, which was my goal! It seems likely we won't make the 500 review goal, which is okay. It's the review ratio that really matters, and that ratio ...

Like Yuriiko, it was the choppiness of the piece that really pulled me into it. I like the way you structured it quite a bit. Moreover though, I really like ...

I like this! Very much like Toy Story. I think all you need to work on is just proofreading, and for that, I really suggest you ask your mom or ...

I thought this was pretty good. Vivid action, good storytelling, and all in all a good brisk read. But, there's always something we could work on! Toscano shouted at his ...

Rhyming is always very difficult to do, and it's something I've never been able to pull off successfully. Neither have most authors, or even published poets for that matter. Here, ...

Have you ever read the book Grendel? It's a terrible, god-awful book, but it seeks to tell the story from Grendel's point of view as well. At any rate, you ...

You need to do some proofreading; for a piece this short, there should be almost no grammar mistakes. For instance, toddler is spelled as "toddle" and "upon his child in ...

Four down; six to go.

You really, really need to proofread this. I had a lot of trouble following the story, and had to read some sections three or four times just to understand what ...

I like this. A lot of emotion, action, and it moves along fast but not so fast that the reader is out of breath trying to keep up. However, what ...

In any case, the first four stanzas seem to wander around a lot. There's not a lot of flow, and the third stanza seems unnecessary. What it looks like you ...

You do a good job of starting this out. You moved straight from a scene to a detailed description of what your aunt means to you. However, there are two ...

May end up extending Review Day for an hour or two seeing as how the site crashed. As a sidenote, I'll write up a blog entry soon about why the ...

Well, we started off really well, but then fell tremendously behind. Guys, please do at least 1 review. It's not much.

Calligraphy ->> I'll do a big "Damage Review" post after all is said done, but the counting of your individual reviews is up to you. Ktg ->> That's great! If ...