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All of you do realize that this poem was posted in 2004? By the way, if you're interested in more of Chevy's work, check out: It was a big hit ...

Firstly, this topic refers to alien aircraft type of UFO's. In any case, I thought this story was kind of interesting/out-there: In space, no one can smell the drifting interstellar ...

This shows activity on YWS over the past week: activity.jpg Kinda neat, no? It's measuring how much system resources YWS is using. So at times on Sunday, 100% of system ...

I think 436 reviews was the final number. That makes for a total of 2617 reviews so far in September and 660 literary works. That's a review ratio of 3.96:1, ...

Got in 10, which was my goal! It seems likely we won't make the 500 review goal, which is okay. It's the review ratio that really matters, and that ratio ...

Like Yuriiko, it was the choppiness of the piece that really pulled me into it. I like the way you structured it quite a bit. Moreover though, I really like ...

I like this! Very much like Toy Story. I think all you need to work on is just proofreading, and for that, I really suggest you ask your mom or ...

I thought this was pretty good. Vivid action, good storytelling, and all in all a good brisk read. But, there's always something we could work on! Toscano shouted at his ...

Rhyming is always very difficult to do, and it's something I've never been able to pull off successfully. Neither have most authors, or even published poets for that matter. Here, ...

Have you ever read the book Grendel? It's a terrible, god-awful book, but it seeks to tell the story from Grendel's point of view as well. At any rate, you ...

You need to do some proofreading; for a piece this short, there should be almost no grammar mistakes. For instance, toddler is spelled as "toddle" and "upon his child in ...

Four down; six to go.

You really, really need to proofread this. I had a lot of trouble following the story, and had to read some sections three or four times just to understand what ...

I like this. A lot of emotion, action, and it moves along fast but not so fast that the reader is out of breath trying to keep up. However, what ...

In any case, the first four stanzas seem to wander around a lot. There's not a lot of flow, and the third stanza seems unnecessary. What it looks like you ...