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Nate

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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Summer

    I liked it. But be careful with the its versus it's! As EliteHusky pointed out, the "It's" in the second line of the third stanza should be "its." It's confusing, ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Chemical

    From what I can tell, this piece suggests imagery of a ritualistic suicide or human sacrifice. However, a lot of this piece seems like fluff with random words and lines ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Warhammer 40k: Change and Decay pt1

    Kyousuke had a very extensive review, so I'll try not to repeat what he said. I think what you have here is a good action sequence. However, I'm not really ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: YWS Radio Is Back On August 27th

    Outside of the USA and Canada, you can use Skype to call in for free Really? As in you don't need to have any Skype Credit at all? I'd appreciate ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Land of Airavel

    Friar Samheil had lived almost his entire life in isolation in the deep forests of the east. His life consisted entirely of tending to a small garden, from which he ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Land of Airavel

    Note: This storybook is based on the now defunct 1000 Monkeys Project, which was an attempt at a massive collaborative work. ywsmap.jpg The map is originally by RayquazaKid . It ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Freedom for Storybooks!

    That's right: the point cost for new storybooks has been reduced from 500 points to zero points . So if you've been wanting to experiment with creating different kinds of ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: YWS Radio Is Back On August 27th

    What Is YWS Radio? YWS Radio is really just a live online podcast. We do it through http://www.blogtalkradio.com, and all you have to do to listen in is point your ...

    Aug 4, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Activity Throughout The Day

    Shadowraiki ->> I think you're misunderstanding the chart. The markers for 8 am are simply that, just markers. It's to help give some understanding to the chart since the chart ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dead End

    When writing an acrostic poem, it's good to separate out the words. Here, that would mean placing an extra line in between "Answers are hidden in a web" and "That ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Games.

    This probably doesn't belong in General Articles. If you want, I can move it to either Other or General Fiction Short Stories. Just let me know. At any rate, it's ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Activity Throughout The Day

    Ever wonder which countries are on YWS at which times? Well, wonder no more my friends. The following chart shows the number of pageviews per hour over the month of ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Please Help Us Catch Spam Reviews

    Spam reviews can come in many shapes and sizes. Sometimes, the reviewer simply quotes the entire work then either adds nothing or adds only a little bit. Other times, the ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Vote For Top-100 Science Fiction, Fantasy Titles

    Some odd ones on that list though. 1632 by Eric Flint is entertaining, but I'd hardly include it on a top 100 list of anything. I also never really considered ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Shop on Amazon? How you can help YWS at no cost

    Just a heads up, but Amazon is having a 20% off sale on high-end industrial equipment . If you've been considering whether or not to buy the TBS APT1 Automated ...

    Aug 2, 2011


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott