NatalieRed

It was abstract, and very much so. The bit about feeling sick was largely an allusion to the first three lines, but I didn't word it very eloquently (as in ...

There are some grammar mistakes, but otherwise this is shaping up to be a lovely story so far. I enjoy the insight we get to Sophia's inner thoughts and the ...

My first post here, and it's a little abstract. Those nights you wasted lying awake in bed Staring at the window when nothing else was said What happened to all ...

The freedom of form you used here is interesting; it helps your words flow better and the poem stays clean-cut without being interrupted by a break. The concept of looking ...

Short and sweet - way to go. Even though most haiku are vague and somewhat detatched, this one is full of feeling. That a paper can dare you to write, ...

Hello, there, Eraqio; there a few things I'd like to say about your lovely poem. First off, the first few lines are wonderful and enticing - something that really draws ...

A very interesting concept; I like your style.