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Re: Cat
I don't understand what the message you are trying to tell the readers is. Maybe it was just unclear to me but it was confusing to say the least. The ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Really
I don't understand what the message you are trying to tell the readers is. Maybe it was just unclear to me but it was confusing to say the least. The ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Once upon a time we both did not know how to spin.
No poem, short story, or novel is perfect but this fantastic poem is very close to it. Of course there are minimal spelling or grammar mistakes but that doesn't take ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Trains
Over all I felt your work was very well written. Almost every line should be ended with a comma, although the first few lines should have been punctuated with a ...
Jul 23, 2014