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Wow! I love fantasy novels and I think you have the potential to be a great fantasy writer given your interest at your age! A few pointers here and there ...

My top 5 books as of right now: 1.The Bible 2.I dreamed of Africa by Kuki Gallmann 3.The Shack by William P. Young 4.Harry Potter by J.K. Rowling 5.Girls of ...

Hey, like she said, this piece is great and definitely a wonderful tribute to mothers! Sunstarfrozenlife, I happen to think that her imagery fits, take for instance: when it's summer, ...

This is a very entertaining read! It's funny how high school life is. However, for a non-fiction piece, I felt that you went into too many details concerning your story ...

Hey I sort of understand your 'Secret of Life' but only after reading it several times. However, I think you have some great content that could be better written. I ...

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Most people who aren't Africans and write about Africa tend to be deeply biased or simply fail to capture the essence of Africa and real emotions of its people. They ...

Thank you! yes, I know some rhymes are a bit forced...I will definitely work on that in my next poem. Thanks again for the review!

I really liked this piece and I understood from the start that the capitalization of the pronouns was an intention on your part. I find this experimental writing great. You ...

Hey Mel! Sorry it's taken me some months :smt002. Anyway, would you please review my poem: Heard in what he feared , which I posted today. It's an Easter poem ...

Hey, I totally agree with you on that one. I have all the five books of Jean M. Auel, and although I claim to have read them all, in real ...

Like everyone else said, I think this piece is brilliant especially in how you capture the girl's emotions in the face of the imminent separation from her man and even ...

The sun had reached its zenith, And the king had arrived at his crosseth, Where traitors had longed for days, To mingle and maneuver their ways, In a crescendo of ...

I like the part where you describe what the hands can do(first stanza); a very creative expression of diversity and unity put together! Like Sophie said, the first stanza is ...

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. I think we both suffer very mild symptoms, because the extremes tend to be on constant medication. I've not been clinically diagnosed, ...