Nameless_And_Shamed

Hm, okay. I'm only going to say one thing. Please, please work on your mechanics/grammar. It kills me when people don't have good mechanics/grammar in poems. That is all.

Sonnets are the devil, I hate them very much and I wish to never do them again!!! O TiVo, without you I could not view The reruns shown on NHPTV, ...

Eating out as an anteater has become much easier than it used to be. Most large places have restaurants, and most restaurants offer ant entrées. Restaurants usually serve these types ...

Chapter One Senna saw him first as a silhouette, there on a short cobblestone bridge, spotted under a streetlamp. She paused at the sight, her heart thumping. Her response was ...

How many of you have ever been told by your parents who you could date and who not to date? Well I’m a victim of that, it all started when ...

Well, I really don't know what exposition is. I have to write about ants in my Creative Writing class in expository form. Does anyone know what that really means??

Oh, thanks. I think I fixed it right.

I like your imagery, a lot. I find your poem very, unique. Also I like how you ended it, I would have found it hard to, by all means. You ...

Hi! Well, I don't mean to criticize anyone, but I do have some suggestions. Your poem needs to flow better like right here: Promise not to tell, A single soul. ...

Winter breeze wraps 'round Autumn trees as cold air sweeps Up yesterdays leaves.

Wind lazily blows As masquerades of leaves fall, Rainbows of autumn.

You didn't tell me you had another story goin'. I read the comment from the other person, and she got all of the things I saw. Good job though. Keep ...

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Pregnancy is to ear infection; Both take a miniscule of bacteria Once inplanted, causes panic and harm. Can be solved with a pill if taken soon enough- Yet one is ...

Simple women should Simply keep their Bony knees drawn tightly. Simple men should Simply keep their Fat mouths drawn tightly.