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Re: Bullets
This was more of a abstract story to me. Very generalized and allows the to draw his or her own story. Although it did not flow in the way of ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: I want to feel alive
I want to sit you down and talk. I want to sit you down and tell you about all the times I have made a fool of myself. I want ...
Dec 19, 2009 -
Re: Left to die
Left to die by my own platoon, left in the middle of this city of ruins. No one knows it name or even its origin. All I have is my ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
I'm more of the actual poetry critic side of reviews instead of the grammar. There are enough members out there to do that. I like your poem. It captures the ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: I am fire
There is a certain mysterious quality behind this whole work [as all poetry does]. But this poem has this evil behind the wording of it. Within the third stanza, when ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Lavender Eyes
Wow. This captures anything that is innocent and in love. You did a great job of the rhythm of the poem.
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: Wellcome to Desolation Row [New member]
Hello I am a new member here at young writers society. I find this website to be the best website where I can share some of my works with the ...
Feb 11, 2009 -
Re: What is Your Favorite Part of Writing?
I voted other. Although researching, creating characters, and time periods are fun, I just enjoy picking a theme and just writing until I get blocked or when my hands falls ...
Feb 11, 2009
