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Nai-Xi

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Bullets

    This was more of a abstract story to me. Very generalized and allows the to draw his or her own story. Although it did not flow in the way of ...

    Jul 31, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I want to feel alive

    I want to sit you down and talk. I want to sit you down and tell you about all the times I have made a fool of myself. I want ...

    Dec 19, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Left to die

    Left to die by my own platoon, left in the middle of this city of ruins. No one knows it name or even its origin. All I have is my ...

    Feb 13, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Untitled

    I'm more of the actual poetry critic side of reviews instead of the grammar. There are enough members out there to do that. I like your poem. It captures the ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I am fire

    There is a certain mysterious quality behind this whole work [as all poetry does]. But this poem has this evil behind the wording of it. Within the third stanza, when ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lavender Eyes

    Wow. This captures anything that is innocent and in love. You did a great job of the rhythm of the poem.

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Wellcome to Desolation Row [New member]

    Hello I am a new member here at young writers society. I find this website to be the best website where I can share some of my works with the ...

    Feb 11, 2009
  • Official Polls Re: What is Your Favorite Part of Writing?

    I voted other. Although researching, creating characters, and time periods are fun, I just enjoy picking a theme and just writing until I get blocked or when my hands falls ...

    Feb 11, 2009


the only theft here is of decency when carina decided to rob me of my pride and put me on a banana
— veeren