NYAUGENYA

I love it,I love it,I love it!Y ou've written it with so much abandon,so much sincerity.Good job.Hope to review more and more of your works.

Harsh it may be but well said.Thank you.

Thanks for the review.I'll work on the punctuation.Magnet was capitalized because as I see it it's something containing a certain power.If it could make me feel that way,why not capitalize ...

Set me up,and I woke up with the sun on my face The blue of the sky's on my gaze I feel I could radiate this joy within me to ...

I think I like the last bit of the husband declaring that the wife had been murdered.That was good plot....The story seems nice but I think the introduction was too ...