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  • Other Re: Chapter 1 of my book--original draft

    Hi Britt :) Glad you liked it, and thanks for your help! About the part that confuses you: after Kaien starts the car, ready to leave from the hospital, the ...

    Jan 20, 2010
  • Other Re: Chapter 1 of my book--original draft

    Hi, this is the first chapter of my book.. still needs work, though. :wink: Comments and reviews always welcome! Please help! Naomi 1 Life as I knew it ended on ...

    Jan 19, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: This is the prologue of my book :D no name yet.

    Hi! Thanks for reviewing! It's been a great help. That was only the prologue. Of course, all the terms are defined within the first chapter. I admit the prologue isn't ...

    Jan 19, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: This is the prologue of my book :D no name yet.

    Hi! So,I've been writing a novel for some time now, and this is its proloque. Criticism and reviews welcome! Help me out! :D Hope you like it. Prologue Falling in ...

    Jan 18, 2010


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