Mythmon

Note: This is a pretty direct continuation of Part 1, so you should read that first. Its not very long. Lies and Forgiveness ...After the feeling of the teleport had ...

Thanks for the review. This part was written before I had all the details of the abilities worked out, so the vagueness is partially because I wasn't sure what was ...

I'm not quite sure I get it. What I think is going on is there is a bunch of aliens who are going to invade earth, and somehow kill all ...

Wow, brilliant. I have always thought schizophrenia was an interesting plot device. Actually I think you have inspired me for something to write. Anyways. Probably my biggest problem in this ...

So far, I like it a lot. Two things struck me as odd. First when you described the rain as salty. Maybe it is a Seattle thing, but salty rain ...

The Diner They had shared a few months together last year. They had developed their skills alongside each other, and as they had grown more powerful and confident in their ...

Very interesting. I'm not sure if, as the last reviewer called it, the sociology would work. The revolution that is. The 'Me Doctrine' seems a bit... unrealistic? shocking? But I ...

First let me say that overall I like the feel of the story. I don't have a lot to add to the other commenter, but I can put in my ...