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Re: Will You Fly With Me?
Hey I really liked your poem! The idea of flying has always fascinated me. (I'm so jealous of birds!) You really put me in the scene. My only criticism is ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Don't Come To My Funeral
Nice poem! It flowed with ease. It made me think, "Wow, if people went to a person's funeral just to make sure they really were dead, I can't imagine what ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
Hey! Your story was an entertaining read. I liked how you didn't use names because then it didn't distract from the story and conflict. I do have to say, however, ...
Apr 4, 2011