My-mystique-Eyes

Okay guys, I changed it...A LOT! I don't know if it sucks any less than the first. So I'd love any advice u have. I think all i might have ...

this is a poem i wrote about 2 ppl who Loved, with hearts that were not whole. And about how, when they came together they did not, COULD NOT make ...

okay, idk what this is it's just a bunch of random crap that came out of my head 2day. I really can't tell if it's good or not so...critique! Walking ...

Part I; Leaving Close my eyes...for the last time. I don't want to wake up and find my world wrecked, shattered and strewn with pain, evar again. Blankets of darkness, ...

This seems like a bad story but it turns out good in the end. I don't know if it is good or not though like writing-wise. So i'd appriciate any ...

Not very poetic, just something that came 2 my mind so i wrote it down. (Adour means midnight in kenya.) Adour. Midnight lies, behind your eyes. I will journey through ...

This is a poem about why I always say sorry. It's basically just me expressing myself. So if it sucks as bad as i think it does, then tell me ...

I dance, But you don't see me. I sing, But you don't hear me. I try so hard to be beautiful, But your eyes pass right over me, and fall ...