Muteman

A;right, good stuff, thanks. I think I'll slice and dice it today. Maybe throw in a nice metaphor or whatever they're called. I'm just glad I got something down, usually ...

On Monday, when I came home, I dropped all my stuff on the floor. I went into the kitchen, got a water bottle, one of those holey containers of blue ...

Needs more concrete details. Give us a name/place/whatever. You should make it specific as humanly possible, then hack and slash things away. Throw in some (VERY few) words like love ...

Eh, only got 3 things up at the moment in the ol' portfolio, but take your pic I suppose.

Having 0 reviews sucks, so here I am. Overall, I liked the the fact that you actual wrote a poem about something real and solid and concrete, not solely emotion ...

This book was great. I would say easily Top 25 books of all time. Maybe not up there like The Catcher in the Rye, but still one of the greats.

Not saying I'm a poetry expert or anything, but going off the pros of the business, so yeah. I would focus more on the concrete. Showing us true blue images. ...

I'm assuming I know what this is about. But being a dude, I'm not that up to hype on that sorta thing. I wouldn't use "Mary Rose" so much, give ...

Upon rereading this I got an idea. You could always turn this into a poem. Add some concrete images and the transformation would be pretty easy. Just an idea.

You just write in the topic in which they post their work in, simple as that.

(Leu)kemical Poison B.D.M. “You, get out, I only want the stuff now” “Okay” The most horrifying composition. White flooring, ceiling, lights. The high pitched intercom. Here sound is thin, wei

Yeah, I think I saw you somewhere else saying the same thing. Try not to flood topics with advertisements. But if you do like to write and whatnot, here's a ...

Nice, sarcasm in poetry, if I'm reading it right. Just on the general outline of the poem, I would mix the stanzas more, as it's two even ones at the ...

Well it's late, but better late than never. And it's not even a real criticism because it's a skillfully done essay. My cousin went through a very similar experience, I ...

Not really the greatest website, but yeah, here it is. Got a few pretty good authors and poets. Uhm, Tom Paine, and David Surette'll be there if you know them. ...