Mutant

I hated, hated, HATED The Call of the Wild by Jack London. I know it's a classic, but it just irritated me every time I opened it. To me, Buck ...

There is one reason I really, really love this piece- it presents cigarettes for what they really are. I can't tell you how many times I've seen "cool" characters in ...

Kafka it might be wise to read all of my posts on here before putting crap up. Thank you for making my decision on leaving final Before I saw this ...

Thank you so much for the reviews, everyone! I'm definitely keeping the capitalization thing in mind, debating whether or not I should capitalize in this case... But I do like ...

Oh yes, the lack of capitalization was intentional. I figured that a rat would have enormous difficulty holding down a shift key and typing a letter at the same time, ...

A/N: I have no idea what to categorize this as. It was written to accompany photographs inside a handmade book. I almost put it in short stories, but nothing happens, ...

I like that this seems to draw from personal emotion and experience- if I have one issue reading the poem, though, it's the rhyming. It feels very forced and unnatural. ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It drew me in from the first stanza- however, I do think that a change of title may be in order; the first couple lines ...

I really need to start coming on more often. I keep trying to remind myself to come check comments, but I just don't. Thank you for all the feedback, everybody. ...

Oh, wow, I haven't been here in forever. But everyone, thank you for critiquing. Explosive Pen, there is a reason for the last two lines- the form of a sonnet ...

Thanks for the advice, Rosey. Actually... I wasn't thinking of Music of the Night. I wrote the poem in math, then on the bus I decided that the last lines ...

Night wraps its violet ‘round winter’s pale day With echo and shadow and absence of light. There’s a shape in the darkness, a flutter of gray And you shiver and ...

I wrote a sonnet in math class the other day, and I'll be putting it up here soon. So you'll be able to judge for yourself whether I'm good or ...

Whoa, lots of replies. =D Thanks for the suggestions for my short story. I've managed to get a plot developing, so it's definitely progressing. The genre? I'm not even sure ...

The last whisper from a child’s lips As fancies drift from fingertips These lines are what makes me love this piece. Every once in a while, I'll see song lyrics ...