MusicManda7

I appreciate your review and I never said I thought I was right. I was just trying to explain.

I wasn't meaning to be rude at all. I was just explaining the point of views.

"We" is humanity. "Ocean Soul" is an individual human, or individual humans. "Your" is you. I am talking directly to the reader.

I think it ends perfectly the way it is. I love it.

I wasn't expecting this when I clicked on the poem! It's really funny, and the ideas flow well together. I like the idea of a teenager pooping in their parents ...

Thank you so much! I write or refer to the ocean in almost every poem I write; to me it has become a huge metaphor for everything I am and ...