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Re: The Monster Inside of Me (Unfinished)
I really love how you managed to use verbs and imagery to describe the fear of the main character. I also love how you manage to keep the reader intrigued ...
Mar 4, 2019 -
Re: Artificial Life 1 (I meet Anna)
Okay so here is one thing I don't get what is the point of the story. I just didn't see any connection to the title then to the story. Maybe ...
Mar 4, 2019 -
Re: war and his eyes chapter 2: The war ship
Okay so I didn't find anything I didn't like in it. I really loved how you made the girl character go through trauma and then you fast forwarded it. As ...
Mar 4, 2019