Munchkinzizzles

There is actually music that it goes to that makes it seem more rythmic. You'd have to hear it to hear the rythm. Sorry that it doesn't.

It's a cool song, however I would expand it. It seems more like a poem than a song. That's all I can really say. :)

We will not sleep anymore, Until we win this war. We will not close our eyes, Not while the innocent die. We will not sit and rest, Until the violence ...

Hm...how would I like to die? Okay, the name that I want the character to have is Mickayla, or Micki, whichever one. I would like to die by tripping over ...

Anyone? Please, help!

My first story, Winning Over Winchester , didn't work out so well. Please, like and comment! January 1, 2010 Dear Diary: The first day of 2008, and my parents already ...

I liked it, but I would just suggest making it a bit more coherant with your characters.

Thanks for your encouraging words, Theif. The whole concept of a beggar who had very little materialistic things, but had so much in things that money couldn't buy was just ...

Thanks for reviewing! I'll read through it and see what I can change. I really appreciate it. Chapter 2 will be coming soon. Please review that one, too. I'd love ...

Hello, everyone! I'm really happy to actually have found this website. I've been looking for a really long time to find somewhere to share my works. I have one thing ...

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Given me something to think about. I'll keep looking at it and seeing if I can make it better. :)

Thanks for the input. :D I'll definitely change some stuff, but I'll only post it once all of your corrections have been made so I don't have to post it ...

This is pretty good, I have to say. Um...I really don't have anything to say about your work, because I don't think that there's really anything to correct. Would you ...

I wrote this on Monday, and I sort of like it. Winning Over Winchester is only a working title, so tell me what you think about it. If you want ...