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Re: Tuesday Chapter 5
Chapter 5: The Surprise My eyelids flutter open. I look around my room, and no one’s there. I sluggishly slide out of my bed, and go down to the kitchen ...
Mar 4, 2010 -
Re: Choke
I rated this 12+ because I thought that it might be a bit overpowering for some. Choke on your tongue, swallow your pride. I’m through with you and all your ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: Tuesday (Chapters 3 and 4)
Three posts in a row? I need to get over my stories. Chapter 4: The Call and the Story The telephone rings enthusiastically from the kitchen counter. I get up ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Tuesday (Chapters 3 and 4)
Oh, and I just really liked the name Jayden. Idk why. Perhaps I should change it?
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Tuesday (Chapters 3 and 4)
I can already guess that Jayden and EJ are gonna end up together. Ahahahahahaha! Perhaps you are wrong, my friend! :) Jk. :) But I'm not sure that's where I'm ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Fifty Bucks (Short Story)
This is a short romantic story. The doorbell rings. I get up and open the door. A sopping wet Chance Taylor stands on my porch. Chance is probably the most ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Tuesday (Chapters 3 and 4)
There were no real grammatical corrections to make to Chapter 2, so I'm posting Chapter 3 in hopes that people will begin to see my story take shape. Chapter 3: ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Dear Diary (#1)
I was planning on making him not a real emo sorta guy. He's just putting up walls and he thinks a rough appearance and cut wrists will help him be ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Tuesday (Chapter 2)
Were there any real grammatical errors? Or things that you would change? I noticed one time where I said "asked" instead of "ask." My story is in the present tense. ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Hello everyone, another newbie :)
I'm not much of a horror person, but I'm writing a murder story! That counts...right??? Oh boy! It doesn't, does it? Well, annnnnnnnyyywaaaaaayyyyy...I'm Munchkinzizzles. You can call me Zizzles, Munc
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: New Kid On The Block
WELCOME! :) What's your favorite cookie? I like cookies. ;) HEE HEE! COOKIES! But I'm on a diet, so I can't have cookies...:( WELCOME! :) Did I already say that? ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Rules by Cynthia Lord???
Has anyone ever read the book, "Rules" by Cynthia Lord? If not, go look for it! It is amazing! Please, guys, do yourself a favor and read it!
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Dally's Girl
:( So sad. But so good! :) You are really good. Have you ever considered writing a longer romantic fiction? Have you already? If you haven't, please do! That was ...
Feb 25, 2010 -
Re: Untitled Story (Chapter 1)
Here is my newest project. :) This one should be pretty good. Criticize, people, criticize! Chapter 1: That Fateful Day Maria, Walker, and I drive down the road in Memphis, ...
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: Tuesday (Chapter 2)
The story will get more interesting! I promise! :) Right now, we're sort of building up our characters a bit, but in chapter six, things will happen. Conflict will arise!
Feb 24, 2010
