MsBamaMeagan

I think this is a very cute poem you wrote. I like how you put it as you hate this and then you love it at the same time. I ...

prologue She was running, running into the depths of the forest to never be heard or seen about again. her heart pumping the thud drum drum skip beat sigh. Tears ...

thanks you guys

This poem is touching and I absolutely loved it. I know how you feel I think everybody's felt like that once in there life even if they don't care to ...

I think at the last line in the poem you put to many words having tiny and petite just didn't make sense. I would take out the tiny and just ...

:smt003 I love the band Metallica. One of my favorite songs by them is Master of puppets. I also like enter sandman. My favorite band I would have to say ...

:mrgreen: :mrgreen: I love how you said "Boy meets girl, Girl kisses boy.She played with his heart just like a toy" I thought that was the cutest thing. Your very ...

I loved this story, I cant wait to read the next chapter to it. Very good overall. Hey, can you do me a favor and make the next chapter really ...

That was very good. I've never read a poem like the one you just made but I do have some critcism though. I got kind of confused by this little ...

I write because its like away to escape from everything. What ever I feel I write. I write to capture the moments, and I try really hard to capture the ...

your poem was very good, its like this is what the person is thinking and how he's feeling. I like how you symbolized it by saying scar kisses I don't ...

that was so good make the next chapter fast please

your story is overall good but you've got some grammar mistakes "Theworld to me is a bowl of rotting emptyness, feelings that people dont knoe about.When they realise that this ...

Don't look away. Don't hide from me. I want to be near you. I can hear you breath, say something to me. I hear your chest heave, don't be scared ...

I loved this poem. It actually made me feel the emotions while reading it. I also loved how it rhymed. pm when you post anything new :smt001