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Re: For The Dreaming
hey thanks for the advice I fixed that verse a little differently. I totally didn't notice that it didn't rhyme while writing it
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: Pendrop Feather (prolouge)
I liked this actually. It seemed different from the usual. It seems to need a bit more of a point to it though. Explain why theyre on the ship, where ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Twilight
hey read your message maybe you'll want to change the title of your poem to something else because anyone who reads this automatically going to think it has something to ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Guardian Angel (I will change title later)
Wow! That was different. Impressive though can't wait till chapter 2!
Jan 14, 2009