Ms.DreamingOfTheMissed

hey thanks for the advice I fixed that verse a little differently. I totally didn't notice that it didn't rhyme while writing it

I didn't find the topic to be so cliche. Actually I quite enjoyed this. It seemed to realate to anyone and everyone out there. I would have made the point ...

So why exactly we're doing this I don't know but I'll go along with it this is me in my cosplay outfit as tenten from naurto It's the only pics ...

ok so this is the lyrics i made up after a song my friend ryan created on his guitar. He came up with the name and the notes but I ...

I didn't quite understand what the setting for this was. I understood some sort of war but in what time? was it in modern day or mideival time? In set ...

wow that was impressive I can't even really find anything to pick on you about. I could ask what exactly you're wondering about in the poem?? line 3 needed a ...

I liked this actually. It seemed different from the usual. It seems to need a bit more of a point to it though. Explain why theyre on the ship, where ...

I liked this actually. It seemed different from the usual. It seems to need a bit more of a point to it though. Explain why theyre on the ship, where ...

hey read your message maybe you'll want to change the title of your poem to something else because anyone who reads this automatically going to think it has something to ...

it could have been thought out better. I agree with DeeDee that this had almost nothing to do with twilight but whatever. in set 3 lines 3 and 4 dont ...

Wow impressive there were a few minor mistaes nothing major I couldnt make out the visualization. I understood everything but had to sort of create the caracters myself. Try adding ...

It seemed to be missing emotion. All of it seemed for like fact fact fact instead of opinion included. Try to add a little more feeling into it. The poem ...

Wow! That was different. Impressive though can't wait till chapter 2!

Her face showed a different girl A different girl than who she was inside. Inside she was a girl sitting in the corner Surrounded by a croud of people. They ...

The horizon a perfect red-orange The ocean a deep blue Under the arising moon and stars I hear the crash of a wave behind me I lay on my board ...