Mrs_Miller_Punk

Thanks for all of your advice. I will take it all into account. This is only the first part, and the main plot is nothing like you'd expect because it's ...

heyy I'm new here too I just wanted to say hi and maybe meet some new ppl could you also check out my first enty please? thanks xx

this is a great piece of poetry :) i love how you've made it rhyme i have no other criticisms to add! everyone else has said what i was thinking!!

This is the first part of Louisa Madison's story. I just wanted to show submit it to see what you guys thought of it, and whether I should carry on ...