MrsMagic41

This was good at drawing me in, but I understand your worry of it becoming too cliché. The trouble is, if like you mentioned you plan to do two Pov's ...

What a great story! No... great doesn't really seem to cover it. What's the word I'm looking for?? Ah, there it it - awesome! Although a ludicrous tale and strangely ...

The trouble with fantasy is that you often run the risk of sounding cliché. All mistakes have been pointed out here by Icy and Octave's provided a great explanation of ...

I'm no good at poetry, so won't comment on structure and form etc. But I think that I preferred the original version. It seemed to fit better even though those ...

I'm not much of a poet myself - and you say that's the same case for you but I will say I thought this was really good! Icy's pointed out ...

This was really awesome! It came up on the features and I'm truly glad that it did or I wouln't have discovered it. I love the conversation between her and ...