Mr_Bacon

I already know of some things that should be changed, but I want to see if anyone agrees with me before I start. Also, do you think doing this in ...

EDIT::: You say you didn't change this at all, eh? That's weird, why would it have come up in stanzas when I reviewed it? Anyway, I guess you'll have to ...

Howdy, it's review time!

Howdy, I'd much appreciate some more input on this: Thanks, you're the best!

...getting more views&reviews on my work? My first post seemed pretty dead and I decided I didn't like it either, so I took it down. My new first post has ...

I could be reading it wrong, but doesn't it begin by saying that there are no horses, just other critters, and then go on to talk about how the only ...

Hey there! :smt003 I'm not going to look for grammar mistakes, 'cause I'm kind of lazy right now :P . The story was sad, and yet you could see that ...

Why do hospitals smell funny? I wonder. I have a seat all to myself between mom and dad, and my feet swing back and forth. I don’t know why we’re ...

My review is going to be rather scathing, I'm afraid. I don't really see how this is a story. Perhaps if this was something you actually experienced you could incorporate ...

Your comments about time tickle my debate bone, and make me want to philosophically disagree :P but as a piece of writing, I can't fault it. As the previous reviewer ...

To be honest, I didn't read all of it. Here are a few suggestion to clean it up a bit though: - Capitalization: characters with special titles need capitalized names/titles. ...

I'd make the stick my viking bastard sword, and pillage an imaginary hamlet.

Is this a Guild Wars fanfic? It's not bad if it is, but I had to wonder because that game has a city called Rin as well as Flameseekers. Quick ...

It's nice in its way, but it's not much of a poem. See if you can flesh it out some more, and give it some actual stanzas. And isn't it ...

Hey, I'm Mike, and I'm from Canada. Does this site have sort of a community feel, or are there just lots of members that do their own thing? See ya ...