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Re: Dreamland Chapter One
I have some issues with loyalty. Leading with a full name introduction never gets my rooting juices going. I always feel that authors should worry less about what their characters ...
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Re: Rise Of The Black Queen, Chpt 0-1
Hello YWS, I hope you enjoy. Note: Please be aware that some of the characters may not speak in standard english, as many of the factions and peoples in Ingand ...
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Re: Holes and Pieces
Heartfelt, if not simplistic. Did manself forget to capitalize the last "I"? Without trying to sound like a parade-pisser-onner, the fragmented style (though bold!) hindered my otherwise enthusiastic
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Re: Of darkness and ducks
A crushing blow to pessamists everywhere! I once wrote a similar poem in the margins of my Philosophy textbook entitled "Ode to the Duck Gentleman" which championed our feathered friends ...
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Re: The Point of Life
Poetry is just as much about the delivery than the words. All good poetry stands up to being read aloud, it's literature with more drama than structure (As a brute ...
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Re: Rise Of The Black Queen - Chpt 0-1
Hello YWS, I hope you enjoy. Note: Please be aware that some of the characters may not speak in standard english, as many of the factions and peoples in Ingand ...
Nov 3, 2011
