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Re: Masks
An island I built, to hold myself, A lofty height, a dusty shelf. I travel light, across the rainy planes, the birds at my back. A lonley road, across the ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The Boat
Sup Playah, Lemme get my fo'shizzle awn, and then proceed to review your poetry. "Faraway" is that meant to be "Far Away"? "I'm waiting for horizon" It just seems akward ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Rise Of The Black Queen - Chpt 0-1
All good points, thanks for the look. Glad you enjoyed the parts I worked hardest on, will look into all those things and hope you'll read some more in the ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
My novel hasn't been touched with a barge pole...most disconcerting. I wonder if you could have a look in obvious exchange for review times of my own...or some sort of ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 2
You seem to have taken the stuff I said onboard (Not that you should care what I said >.
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Rise Of The Black Queen: Chpt 1 (Continued)
I waited a couple of minutes before trying to rise to my feet, the act of putting pressure on them caused a grinding agony that made me perspire and drained ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Last Human on Planet Earth- #3
Okay, here we go. Pastor Malcolm Preached on the events which recently had captured so much attention. “Most of you have probably already heard that the United Nations DNA Research ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Jester
Thankyou for your positive comments! I didn't really think it would go down so well ^^. I'll try to keep them comming!
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Rise Of The Black Queen - Chpt 0-1
Thankyou very much for your time, to read it and all. Maybe the style of speaking is distracting, I might rectify this later. I'm glad that the list of things ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Jester
A fevered dream, a rapid hope. A moonbeam through a telescope, So fragile now it comes and goes. I'll keep my staggering, drunken throes. A string of words, a simple ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
Thankyou for your time! I am at your disposal for reviews or slaying Internet Beasts such as the Forum Troll, Nihingr The Lagg Serpent, The Everlasting Flame War Kings, The ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Will Review For Cookies *OPEN*
If you would be so kind... Just need a general look through and would obvious re-pay your kindness and experience with time of my own...or narcotics.
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: free reviews all around
Ooh OOH! ME! :smt003
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 1
Sup! I'm going to do my reviewing thingy now... [I tip toe into our six year old brothers room to try my hand at getting him up. Switching off his ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Of darkness and ducks
Ode to the Duck Gentleman O! Mr Duck, thou art so pretty, So very suave, when life is shitty. You drive all those Duck-Ladies mad! You're here to stay, I ...
Nov 3, 2011
