Mr.SpaceMan

It glides by my eyes with a flash of colour, It's wisdom only shown through the blankness of it's features, It's silence is the loudest noise, the strongest opinion and ...

This is a very well thought out and written poem. I love how you were able to arrange the poem to feel as if the poem is written by a ...

Slowly, I walk down the stairs into the subway. I see a woman gently touch her lover on the arm, making him grin and wrap his arm around her waist. ...

This is a terribly sad story and although i have never experienced this first hand, i still feel terrible. It's also amazing how you were able to tell such a ...

Welcome to YWS. This is a good start and has potential to be very entertaining however this has a few grammatical errors and structure errors that aren't quite ready for ...

Very well written and enjoyable. I like how you were able to keep the poem general enough that people were able to imagine what they were running away from. It ...

Thankfully it was over. I looked behind me and saw that I was hanging sixty feet above the ground, dangling by a man-made lifeline. She wanted me to swing from ...

Hail, in the shape of metal shards rain down upon me Scrambling to my feet I try to move away, Like a mouse, running away from an owl It is ...