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Re: Her Molten Core - Chapter 1 (16+)
Hiya Snoinkers! =D So, this was pretty dang awesome, I have to say. I love your oh-so-Snoinkish narrative voice, what with the humor and sarcasm and all. :P As a ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Matthew and Ali
Hey Eli! It's not often I get to review something of yours, so woot! ;) I'm glad you took an original approach with your story and gave some hint of ...
Sep 15, 2010 -
Re: Your Monster
Hey Isha! I'm here to review. I like the story you're telling; I really do! It's interesting, and something I would come up with (so naturally I like it ;) ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Aren: Guardian Angel
Hey Bay Wolf! I'm here to review. =D I like the concept you have here. Angels these days are so overused and cliched (almost as much as vampires), but I ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: The Birth
Hey Blackbird! Here to review. : ) So this was pretty good. You have a definite grasp of imagery, and it really shows in this. You've described things in such ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Russian Soldier.
Rawr. Sorry I'm late. I tend to do that, as you already know. *sigh* Anywho! On to the review. I'm not sure if you still want just general thoughts about ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Welcome to the Masquerade
Hey Irie! I'm here to review, finally. I know I said I would be here yesterday, but I was babysitting. xD Still, here goes nothing. I'm going to start with ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Words are death
Hi screamandshout! I'm here to review; sorry I'm late. :D First, let's go into nitpicks! I've always been limited, Seven syllables by words I cannot say. Six I've always been ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Gray~ Chp. 1
Ooh. Ooh! OOOOOOH! Nutty, this is awesome! *gigglesnomps* I had no idea you were this amazing! *deep breaths* Now on to the review. So yeah, as all these other goons ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Chilly Farm~A Short Story
Hey Shubhi! Here to review as requested. As Lava said, the nitpicks are all covered, so I'll focus on other things. :D This left me at a loss, to be ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: A little coin’s message
Hi Yuriiko! Here to review as promised. :) So, my first impressions: I don't think this was very poetic. I mean, you have the format down and all, but your ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Suspected Criminal
To me, this reads more like prose than poetry. There's no real poetic symbolism or pattern to it, and that disappointed me. :( One thing I think you need to ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Girl Without Keys
It's Quillie! Hi! I have to say, this was really good to me. For one, the plot is oober-original and a great read. I love, as Lilymoore said, that it ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: parallels
Hey Shaundeman! Here to review. : ) AFTER 98.6 “Sir, I have a report to make.” “Yes Sergeant, what is it?” “Intruders have been detected in Harry city,” The Sergeant ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Hollow
Okay, FIRST of all, mister. Capitalize your "i's" and fix the typos that I can see throughout this. Honestly, it's very simple stuff. Second of all, I feel that your ...
Jun 27, 2010
