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Mr.Knightley

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Her Molten Core - Chapter 1 (16+)

    Hiya Snoinkers! =D So, this was pretty dang awesome, I have to say. I love your oh-so-Snoinkish narrative voice, what with the humor and sarcasm and all. :P As a ...

    Oct 6, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [September Contest] Matthew and Ali

    Hey Eli! It's not often I get to review something of yours, so woot! ;) I'm glad you took an original approach with your story and gave some hint of ...

    Sep 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Your Monster

    Hey Isha! I'm here to review. I like the story you're telling; I really do! It's interesting, and something I would come up with (so naturally I like it ;) ...

    Sep 14, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Aren: Guardian Angel

    Hey Bay Wolf! I'm here to review. =D I like the concept you have here. Angels these days are so overused and cliched (almost as much as vampires), but I ...

    Sep 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Birth

    Hey Blackbird! Here to review. : ) So this was pretty good. You have a definite grasp of imagery, and it really shows in this. You've described things in such ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Russian Soldier.

    Rawr. Sorry I'm late. I tend to do that, as you already know. *sigh* Anywho! On to the review. I'm not sure if you still want just general thoughts about ...

    Jul 27, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Welcome to the Masquerade

    Hey Irie! I'm here to review, finally. I know I said I would be here yesterday, but I was babysitting. xD Still, here goes nothing. I'm going to start with ...

    Jul 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Words are death

    Hi screamandshout! I'm here to review; sorry I'm late. :D First, let's go into nitpicks! I've always been limited, Seven syllables by words I cannot say. Six I've always been ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Gray~ Chp. 1

    Ooh. Ooh! OOOOOOH! Nutty, this is awesome! *gigglesnomps* I had no idea you were this amazing! *deep breaths* Now on to the review. So yeah, as all these other goons ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Chilly Farm~A Short Story

    Hey Shubhi! Here to review as requested. As Lava said, the nitpicks are all covered, so I'll focus on other things. :D This left me at a loss, to be ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A little coin’s message

    Hi Yuriiko! Here to review as promised. :) So, my first impressions: I don't think this was very poetic. I mean, you have the format down and all, but your ...

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suspected Criminal

    To me, this reads more like prose than poetry. There's no real poetic symbolism or pattern to it, and that disappointed me. :( One thing I think you need to ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Girl Without Keys

    It's Quillie! Hi! I have to say, this was really good to me. For one, the plot is oober-original and a great read. I love, as Lilymoore said, that it ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: parallels

    Hey Shaundeman! Here to review. : ) AFTER 98.6 “Sir, I have a report to make.” “Yes Sergeant, what is it?” “Intruders have been detected in Harry city,” The Sergeant ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Hollow

    Okay, FIRST of all, mister. Capitalize your "i's" and fix the typos that I can see throughout this. Honestly, it's very simple stuff. Second of all, I feel that your ...

    Jun 27, 2010


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