Mr.Knightley

I'm a little confused about this poem. Is the noun "snow" used to describe something more abstract like despair, greed, or hate, or are you literally writing a poem about ...

I really loved this, Phantom. I agree with Moriah on the fact that you didn't come right out and say that she was playing the piano, but still made it ...

Hi starlit! I really enjoyed reading this poem. The words you used created images in my head, and I love it when the 'story' someone tries to tell is clear ...

Hi! I agree with Moriah that some color would be a pleasant addition to this poem. I'm not sure, but I think I've heard of this kind of poem before, ...

Hi Urban! Welcome to YWS. I hope you like it here. Good luck and happy writing! :P

Hi, Lauren! I'm here to review your work! First off, let me say that this setting already has me interested. I like the idea of having wolf companions for humans ...

Hi! I'm here to review your work like you asked me to. First off, let me just say that you have a great writing style, and I already wish this ...

Russia needs some writers, man. :P

Voted. Badges sound great to me!

Hi everyone! I'm posting my own thread on WRFF because, as NaNoWriMo's Chris Baty would say, the guilt monkeys are eating me alive. I've been on YWS since June, and ...

Say I was poking through someones portfolio, and I found something I liked, or wanted to critique, only the last comment made on it was a year ago, or something. ...

Here's mine! Name: Captain Kidd (I had to, Moriah!), the former Pirate King Age: early forties Description: Grey and weathered, with a peg leg replacing his right one. Position: Gunner ...

fountain of youth.jpg Plot: In a rough and tumble tavern sitting squat on the docks of Port Royal, a group of old ship mates come together by chance (or not?) ...

For me, Obama has proved again and again that good government and effective government policies are faster (and better) for the growth of a nation. After that, the rest falls ...

I know Elly's name! I know Elly's naaaaame! But I can't tell. Nope, I cannot. :P Oh, and I would love that, Ranger. Yush I would. Me: Well, my name ...